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Applekit. Critique please!

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I can't wait to roleplay him. c:

His name will be Applefoot. I LOVE that name so much.

I have to wait till my account is approved though. :c
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

I really like this cat. The red and green for the name is really creative, as those are apple colors. However, I kind of think the... aura... should be red, just to highlight apple-ness, because of the green eyes. However, I understand why you wouldn't do it- the reddish fur. I love the eyes... mostly all of the face, except that one of the ears is bigger then the other. But you mightv'e meant to do that, so. If you were trying to make shadows, it was good, but there was random bits of dark color (such as one of the hind paws). If that was just his marking, then... okay. I like the bubble. Overall, its better then I could ever do. I like it.